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I would suggest maybe character descriptions. Another thing is that some of the story, it would refer to a her as $him or $his. Otherwise, it is great!

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hey, I think i found an error, in the beginning, and after you make your mc; when you go to pick your companions (like their gender), i go and try clicking the gender i want for that companion, but it says there's a error that pops up says that a error has accorded or something like that and the text on the next page when i tried to see if i fixed anything by refreshing the page all the people's names has like '$' or something like that in the names because the previous page, or coding didn't work so i think that i found a error, and i think that should be fixed. ^^

Thank you for pointing that out. It took me a while but I figured it out. Hopefully, it will work for you now.

omg tyyy!!! ill start playing it again right away!! <333

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This story is good. I love the dutifil dynamic of our MC. ♥️ And im interested in seeing what happens with our engagement after this. Poor MC his dad is a ass 😒

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Thanks. I enjoyed writing the duty-focused MC.  The Dad certainly is making some interesting choices...

I really like the story and hopefully you continue it ❤️

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Interesting, I'd like to see how the story will develope. I'll keep an eye on this one.